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Nov5

Posted on Nov 5th, 2007 by Jonathan : Musicated Jonathan
Frost glazes cut fields
dry dead sunflowers head home
geese squad honks and waves

©2007 Jonathan Blakeslee


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Tagged with: Poetry, Haiku, Nature, Autumn
davie : laughter
3 days later
davie said

perfect!

tangentally seasonal-
natural,
personal,
without person.

cool beans.

Jonathan : Musicated
4 days later
Jonathan said

Thanks for your comment.  Generally with haiku I let the first lines stand as they show up on the page.   Like a soup or stew.  I want to see what it tastes like tomorrow :)

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